I would hate being famous, for anything.
that was quite good.
good music choice, and nice energy all the way through
thoroughly enjoyed it, keep it up!
I certainly liked it. I'm surprised that it wasn't taken well, but I also find the comments pretty entertaining...
the whole flash was great. perfect speed, perfect voice. if anything, I didn't think the beginning was as funny as the rest. going on my faves
Hey! now that was pretty good. Short, lacking a plot, but no matter, because it was very enjoyable. The music was great, the animation was very smooth. Certainly your best yet. Can't wait for more and more of your stuff. I've been watching these for about a year now, keep it up.
thanks qwertyporst! its cool when people keep track, I really appreciate it.
I want to see more stuff of yours too :) flim was so rad.
A Surprising One
That was quite good! I was not thinking I'd be impressed with it at first glance, but you are on my favorites so I gave it a try. Very good style of one-man frame by frame animation. The story was powerfully delivered with such simple dialogue and text - and the bit of humor kept my attention!
honestly, it wasn't superb.
the animation was fairly sloppy. try using onion skinning next time or draw frames borders while you animate- and definitely use a better camera (better yet, a scanner) with CONSISTENT lighting on each exposure. the inconsistent twitchy flashing of all the frames was very painful to watch, even though some of the transitions were good. nice use of tweens and fbf, but like I said keep the lighting the same on each frame
the audio choice was not very pleasant, neither was the compression. try making some original music to accompany a video
cheers for the effort though. I always enjoy watching an old-school style fbf animation.
keep it up
that was excellent. completely off-beat and out of context. the whole thing just flowed so perfectly well out of order with no need for a timeline
"My dreds are very long. what time is it? my name.. is whoopi goldgerg"
sounds so much like a really silly improv troup in one of their stranger moments
I question my standards
HAHAHAHAH! somehow, I can bring myself to laugh at that. the animation is shit, but the scene changes and audio track are honestly pretty funny. the sound of those crappy voice generators saying "shit" never gets old. I still have a laugh whenever I see a flash with swearing robots voices in it.
Yeah, Pelo has never been the best animator...but it's the audio that makes it work.
Who doesn't get tired of hearing it say "Shit" over and over again?
some rare words
This is a very very unique animation. Your textures are always very well combined and the frame-rate inconsistency keeps my eyes moving across the screen. Dream-like, tangible, but still short and sweet as to not lose attention in the slightest.
Where do you import your texture bitmaps and backgrounds from? I seem to remember thinking they often look like scanned images and drawings in your older animations.
The sky in my parts (morrow's parts) is a scanned in piece of paper towel, and all the bitmappy pixel art was done in flash with the pixel tool, available for free at the adobe exchange page, on adobe.com.
The pattern in the intro for the person's clothing wasnt actually done by either of us, it was made by a really talented artist named Dan Funderburgh. You should google him, hes really great. Some might say I'm taking credit for his work in that situation, but I was going for a collage sort of thing, and in collages thats what you do, you cut apart other peoples stuff. The ground in the intro was taken from the
texture site found below. :)
thanks for the review qwertyporst, nice to here from you :)
I'm not usually one to enjoy a collab of numerous artists only working on a few seconds at a time, but you used a superb track from KingB and worked the visuals very well for it. The one and only critique I could offer which stuck out was the lack of interesting audio synchronisation for the rhythms of [Boxclever] - aside from the occasion accidental beat-match of visual transitions with the music beats. Enjoyed this looped version of the song as well.
8-bit fbf all the way!
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